On the page and on the stage: Ali Bacon finds there's nothing like a live performance to sharpen the editing pencil

Recently I was lucky enough to have a short story chosen for the twice yearly Stroud Short Stories event which took place last Sunday and before this I'd already done two other reading 'gigs' at Writers Unchained and Talking Tales , both in Bristol. Reading at Talking Tales For all of these evenings I spent some time rehearsing my piece, especially for Stroud which has the biggest audience and called for a story I hadn't read aloud before. As usual I found myself making small changes to my typescript - as I often do - to get the right emphasis or to smooth the flow of words. Just to be clear, I had submitted these pieces in advance to a judge or judges as a document, but I justified these changes to myself on the grounds that spoken word and written word have slightly different requirements and none of these changes were substantial. Or were they? After SSS organiser John Holland, reminding me that all SSS stories would go into a futu...