WRITING FOR RELUCTANT READERS by Ann Evans
Most of us take for
granted the fact that we can read and know what it's like to enjoy a good book. But how sad it is for those who have never
known the pleasure of reading either because they are dyslexic or they struggle with reading for some other reason.
It's so rewarding to a writer regardless of the genre of book they write, when they get positive feedback or a good review. Even more so when the reader is a child or teenager who admits that they don't like reading - yet they loved a particular book that you'd written.
But the idea of actually writing for the market of reluctant teen readers was something of a challenge - but also a great experience, and one I hope I'll get the opportunity to do again. It's only something I've been doing for the last six months or so. I was excited to be asked by the publisher, Badger
Learning if I would like to try for a series of horror books for
12-15 year olds with a reading age of around 8-9.
What they wanted were good hard-hitting
stories with adult themes that would interest a teenager but written in an easier to
read manner, making sure the plot moves on at a cracking rate. I sent two or three
ideas to them and happily they liked one and commissioned me to
write the 6,000 word title, Nightmare.
Here's the blurb:
Everyone gets bad dreams don’t they? Todd thinks he knows why he’s getting nightmares, night after night. Guilt!But when he tries to put things right, it only makes matters worse. A whole lot worse!Those diabolical nightmares begin to haunt his waking moments – and those closest to him.
And a short extract:
Midnight - and Todd awoke in a sweat, again. A cold sweat making the sheets stick to his clammy skin, making his heart thump. Sleep was rare these nights, since…He swung his legs out of bed and sat, head in hands. Of course he couldn’t sleep. He couldn’t sleep because he was riddled with guilt.He didn't mean to be so spiteful. When weirdo Elspeth from his class asked him out, he didn't mean to humiliate her – destroy her. Only all his mates were watching and he'd felt embarrassed.
The look of the book
was another thing the publisher took into consideration. No
self-respecting 15 year old wants to be seen reading a book that is
clearly intended for an 8 year old. So the covers, not just of my
book, but all 12 books in the Teen Reads II series (and all their other series) have
fantastic covers.
I don't know about the
other authors, but I'm sure they had the same experience, I was sent
sample ideas for my cover, and I had a say in which we should go for.
For Nightmare, it was a unanimous agreement, that the gaunt haunting
face with dark hollow eye sockets and a gaping screaming mouth suited
the story so well. And once it was confirmed that the cover was to be
that image I was able to tweak my story to make sure my narrative
matched what was on the cover.
Then a couple of months
ago, I was invited to try for another new series they were planning,
Dark Reads, again for 12-15 year olds, but this time with the
reading age of 6-7. I did a double take of the brief when I saw they
wanted stories of just 600 words!
This series was to be
based loosely around the classic horror stories that most people have
heard of. One idea of mine was based around The Picture of Dorian
Gray by Oscar Wilde. This turned out to become Red Handed.
And inspiration for the other book, Straw Men was based loosely on a
certain part of The Wicker Man. I won't say which part of the
story so as not to spoil it. But it's pretty sinister. The actual
story behind Straw Men had been rattling about in my brain ever since I went to a village Scarecrow Festival and realised how creepy
they were.
Writing a book in
just 600 words was definitely a challenge. But knowing that each
double page spread would have a full page illustration, I thought of
it like a picture book, and allowed the picture to tell more of the
story that the words left out. So often there was more explanation in
my M/S than actual narrative and dialogue.
The publisher did a
great job in finding the right artists for each book. The talented
artist and animator Amit Tayal illustrated Red Handed and the amazing
Kevin Hopgood who has worked on Iron Man, Marvel Comics
and much more, did the Straw Men illustrations. I consider
myself very lucky!
The icing on the cake
obviously will be to get some positive feedback from some reluctant
or struggling teen readers. So if you know anyone who fits the bill...
Here's the link to find out more, and the
publisher are currently running a competition to win the entire set
of Dark Reads.
Dark Read titles:
Blood Moon by Barbara Catchpole
Ringtone by Tommy Donbavand
The Black Eyed Girl by Tim Collins
The Girl in the Wall by Tommy Donbavand
Doctor Jekyll and Little Miss Hyde by Tony Lee
Ship of the Dead by Alex Woolf
Red Handed by Ann Evans
Straw Men by Ann Evans
Please visit my website: www.annevansbooks.co.uk
Comments
Go and read the short texts for Sendak's 'Where the Wild Things Are' or, even better, 'In The Night Kitchens', if you think this work is easy or lacking in art.