Getting the words right - Karen Bush
Choosing the right words is so important - not just in getting across a point or describing an image, but in actually creating the right sort of atmosphere.
Take H.P Lovecraft for example: his protagonists invariably find themselves
out and about under a gibbous moon.
Not a boring old crescent moon or a full moon, you note, but a gibbous one.
It's not necessary to look up the definition in the dictionary: it's the very sound and look of the word which does the job in setting the scene, rather than knowing the moon phase referred to.
Already you can feel the goosebumps starting.
And before long, you've really got the willies when the hero bumps into one of the local peasants who is sure to have a squamous appearance ...
What are your favourite words or turns of phrase?
Not as scary as HPL ... but might raise a hackle or two ...
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Comments
Squamous - covered or characterised by scales. So a fish is squamous, I suppose?
All the Authors Electric must know by now that one of my favourite phrases is 'herding cats.' Imagining someone trying to herd cats can give me hours - well, okay - minutes of solid amusement. It's said to be a cliche, but I find it very vivid. I feel the same about 'the elephant in the room'. I think it very clearly sums up that all too frequent atmosphere of people steadfastly ignoring the very obvious.
And Lee - yes, of course!
And Reb - sometimes consistency in spelling makes sense ... can you imagine the confusion between desiring a packet of Bassett's and something entirely different ...
;-)
OK, a small sample: auger (think 'nigger'*) for the cognoscens folk, spang (flash), racked (pissed off), quantangled (quantum entangled), the insecs, often referred to as 'insects' (Inland Security), snugs (snoop bugs), kankers & greasers etc.
(*I absolutely refuse to use euphemisms like 'n-word', 'f-word', 'c-word'. Nope, won't do it.)
and madwippitt, what's wrong with a combination? post coital smoking is so very last season, doncherknow?
And Jan ... chocolate as a substitute for a fag, possibly: but liquorice requires too much chewing.