How short is short? - Lynne Garner
As a writer of short stories I love how a story can be conveyed in a few words. So when I'm teaching my creative writing courses I often set homework and ask my students to write a short story. Before I even have the chance to go any further I'm often asked how short is short. I tend to use this opportunity to introduce them to the story forms of flash fiction (also known as nano-fiction, sudden fiction,
micro-fiction and the micro-story) using the following as examples:
I then introduce them to the 'twister' which is a story using just 140 characters which originated on the social media platform Twitter. Here is an example by Ron Gould:
“In
bed, struggling, he succumbs.”
A. J Chilson
and
“For
sale: baby shoes, never worn.”
Ernest Hemingway
I then introduce them to the 'twister' which is a story using just 140 characters which originated on the social media platform Twitter. Here is an example by Ron Gould:
"Time travel
works!" the note read. "However you can only travel to the past and
one-way. " I recognized my own handwriting and felt a chill.”
Or these examples written by the writer and film maker Simon Sylvester (wish I had this guys talent):
“She insisted they call the baby Robert. If he’d known
the real reason,
he’d have put up more of a fuss.”
“They walked up the hill together, father and son.
He
emptied the little urn from the top of Waslade; he walked down on his own.”
Or
my own:
Josh
watched the stag's breath float on the chilled autumn morning air. He checked,
one shot left. Ready, aim, press. The perfect image.
I then introduce them to the dribble, drabble and droubble (which they often think I'm making up).
A dribble is a story that has exactly 50 words, a drabble has
exactly 100 words and a droubble has exactly 200 words. You're
allowed 15 additional words for the title but unused words cannot be used in your story. If you'd like to find out more about these forms then click here.
So in answer to the question how short is short that's up to you.
Having read this I'm now setting you the challenge of writing a little bit of flash fiction or if you want to really go for it then why not have a go at writing a twister. Oh and please do share your results below I'd love to read them.
Lynne
My latest short story collection Coyote Tales Retold is available on Amazon in ebook format. Also available Meet The Tricksters a collection of 18 short stories featuring Anansi the Trickster Spider, Brer Rabbit and Coyote is available as a paper back and an ebook.
I run the following online courses for Women On Writing:
Comments
Dipika - Thanks. I find encouraging students to write these demonstrates to them quite quickly how to make every word count.
'That ring you lost, was it a wedding ring?'
'Not really.'
And love Brer Rabbit - they were our favourite stories read to us in primary school! Good to see you waving the flag for him (and all the others!)
Pinning all her reasoning on one answer " I will survive." She stepped through a shimmering hole into another dimension of the present as an unwanted hungry refugee.
Madwippitt - the ashes one normally gets a good conversation going with the students who come up with lots of different scenarios.
Karen - Your Twister is just up my street love a bit of fantasy come Sci-Fi.