THE RETURN OF THE MIGHTY ATOM by John A. A. Logan
There
was quite a lengthy period in the history of publishing when the short story
was held in higher regard than the novel.
A
glance now at the collected works of Thomas Hardy, D. H. Lawrence, Graham Greene,
or Vladimir Nabokov, shows the huge volume of short stories they produced
alongside their novels.
Authors
such as Katherine Mansfield, O. Henry, “Saki”, and Sherwood Anderson published
short stories exclusively, in some cases famously being unable to manage the
novel form when they tried their hand at it.
Aside
from being a playwright, when it came to prose, Anton Chekhov was entirely
satisfied to focus his art on the perfection and development of the short story
alone.
In
his memoir, A MOVEABLE FEAST, Hemingway makes it quite clear that he and F.
Scott Fitzgerald turned to the sale of short stories to magazines whenever they
urgently needed to keep the wolf from the door; Hemingway only being more
stringent in his ideals than Fitzgerald by refusing to change the ending of a short
story just to make a sale.
The
short story, not the novel, was the cash-cow of their day.
And
later on, artistically, from Alice Munro to Ali Smith, the decision to balance
an output in novel form with an almost equal output in the form of short story
collections is clearly evident.
At
the time I started writing short stories in the early 1990s (influenced to do
so on a creative writing course at Aberdeen University taught by William
McIlvanney, whose story collections I had admired) it seemed that short stories
were somehow just “in the air”. Wherever I looked in bookshops or libraries, I
saw that James Kelman, Bernard Mac Laverty, A. L. Kennedy, Milan Kundera: all their first books published were story
collections.
It
seemed to be the acknowledged rite of passage.
Novelists
like Saul Bellow and Bernard Malamud stressed how important to them were their
story collections, like THE MAGIC BARREL.
“Put
together a dozen and you’ve got a book,” they said.
And
Raymond Carver’s reputation as a master of the short story was, by then,
solidifying into something of legendary proportion, renowned for the tightness
and spareness of his vision (though it
wasn’t yet common knowledge that his editor Gordon Lish had been carving down
Carver’s stories before publication, often against Carver’s will and to his
great upset, until they were about half their original length)…and all Ray
Carver published, in the way of fiction, was the short story.
Perhaps
it is no coincidence that 1993, the year I started writing short stories
seriously, was also the year the short story zeitgeist perhaps reached its
international and cultural zenith, if that can be defined as influence on other
art forms, with the manifestation of Robert Altman’s multi-award-winning film,
SHORT CUTS, based on nine Raymond Carver stories (and one poem).
Maybe
a lot of people caught the subliminal bug and started writing their stories
that year.
More
fundamentally, though, around that time in the early 1990s, there seemed to be
a sense that within a 20-page-or-so short story there could be hidden, as
within the pulsing egg-yolk heart of a neutron star, a terrible potential for
power which was out of all proportion to size.
It
seemed that Chekhov, Carver, Mac Laverty and Kelman had made it the atomic art
form.
This
was the shocking, half-felt potential of the short story that obviously had
kept artists clutching in its direction again and again over centuries, if not
millennia.
To
catch lightning, not just in a jar, but in a jar so small that the compression
and confinement and pressure might bring to bear such weight on the captured
atom that the detonation in the mind from such an event might be potentially
limitless.
How
many times did Chekhov chase that mystery towards the horizon? Nabokov made
those journeys too.
Not
like the novel where you can take years to gather the lightning into one area,
like herding thousands of sheep; no, Chekhov had to catch a single bull of a
lightning bolt and get it in that jar…or else watch it escape to the limitless
horizon and cause a storm out of all reach.
Those
far-off storms are pretty, and much safer…but they leave the jar sadly empty
for posterity.
Throughout
the 1990s, having studied the method of the masters, I too gathered my atoms…I
met the great lightning catcher, Bernard Mac Laverty, one night in 1998 and I
told him I loved his story collection, THE GREAT PROFUNDO.
He
poured me some wine and told me to love my own book instead.
He
told me to sell my stories to editors, and gain “credits”…and become “known”…
So
I did as that fine man told me…I took my stories and sent them to the editors
of literary magazines and anthologies…the first two I gave away happily for
free…then they started paying me…£15 was my first price for one of these atoms
or short stories…then £20…then £25…then £60 became my rate…I disposed of
several varied atoms at that price…then in the year 2000, as though in some
sort of millennial burst of confidence, my price shifted to £165 when editors,
A L Kennedy and John Fowles wanted one of my short stories for a paperback
anthology to be published by the London publisher, VINTAGE, which was to be
distributed and sold in most countries of the world, from Japan to South
America, from Africa to Europe, where my work would share space with stories by
Alan Warner, Louis De Bernieres, William Boyd, Alasdair Gray, Edwin Morgan, and
Rose Tremain. There was my name on the red back cover of the book alongside
their names, my atom spliced with their atoms, and there was the book, NEW
WRITING 9, reviewed in the British and Chinese press and taught on the degree
syllabus English Literature course of Sofia University in Bulgaria.
And
there was the statement on the first page of the book:
“An
anthology which promotes the best in contemporary literature. It brings
together some of our most formidable talent.”
Next,
it was PICADOR paying me £400 for another short story, this time chosen by Toby
Litt and Ali Smith to be placed in another paperback anthology with worldwide
distribution, where my short story shared space with short stories from Muriel
Spark, Fay Weldon, David Mitchell, Edwin Morgan, John Berger…this time the
reviews were in the Indian and London Press.
So
it seemed to all be true then, what Mr Mac Laverty had told me, the way to try
to make your way in this world as a writer was to disseminate your short story atoms
far and wide.
Around
this time, I was even invited to open the jar and release one of them in public
live at the Edinburgh International Book Festival…£75 to read the story at a
microphone…£80 expenses…£60 for publication of the story in EDINBURGH REVIEW.
I
had gathered my atoms then, I had loved my own book…I had gained my “credits”
by selling my short stories one at a time…I had followed all of Mr Mac
Laverty’s good advice…surely now, like my idols, I could get a book of my short
stories published? By this point I was selling every story I sent out, several
times finding two editors who both wanted to buy the same story…so how could I
fail to get a book of short stories published somewhere in Britain at that rate?
My
atoms were ready, and in alignment.
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But
it was precisely at this point that my atoms all hit the wall.
There
was no way Mr Mac Laverty could have known it but, by the time he gave it, his
advice was already seriously out of date.
I
found out though, when my first literary agent sent me a list of my short
stories she had read, underlining the 3 she had “loved best”. “But,” she also
hand-wrote on the letter, “I just can’t shift short story collections”
Another
agent told me that editors “say they like them but pay peanuts for them”.
The
next agent told me “sometimes they publish a story collection now, just to keep
a writer happy, if he/she has been successful commercially with their novels,
but the collections don’t make money for anyone.”
I
started to notice then, the statements in literary agents’ details: “No short
story collections.”
So,
I let it happen; I let them all convince me then that short story atoms,
compressed neutron stars of terrible disproportionate power…were out of date
and uncommercial, a dead loss in the modern UK publishing scene.
I
forsook atoms then, and turned instead to the writing of 5 novels, which took a
number of years.
But,
in 2008, after my fifth novel, The Survival of Thomas Ford, was
completed…something inside me started to grow and rebel again, something
intransigent that didn’t care about what was “shiftable” or “in fashion commercially
in Edinburgh or London”…some feral proton in the nucleus of an atom’s atom
within my gut…started to “shift” itself…and I began to listen again,
unfettered, to that internal voice...
It
wasn’t easy after several years of only writing novels, I had to learn all over
again the gears and mechanisms of the short story.
But,
over 18 months between December 2008 and summer 2010, I opened the jar 9 times
to chase down 9 new lightning bolt short stories across the plain of the inner,
storm-ravaged mind.
They’ve
been jarred for 2 years now, secretly, these 9 new short stories.
I
can feel their specific gravity emanating from the molecules of the glass that
holds them.
It’s
time to let them go. I’m preparing the ignition of the release mechanism now.
The
plan is to take these 9 new atoms and splice them with a stabilising
bond-element, that short story I sold to PICADOR for £400 at my “distribution
peak”, the one that went off in a paperback sold as far away as Japan, South
America, Africa, Australia, it took PICADOR and THE BRITISH COUNCIL behind a
book back then to arrange distribution like that…but today of course with
epublishing…I can take these 10 short stories…gather them safely in an ebook… and
project them into the world any day soon in the form of a short story collection
entitled STORM DAMAGE, which seems an apt title to me.
There
is no-one left to tell me now that this will be an “unshiftable” commodity
worth only “peanuts”.
On
the contrary, I am in correspondence with readers, who enjoyed The Survival of
Thomas Ford and say they wish to see the next book…just as soon as I get these
10 atoms into optimum alignment.
So,
back now to the electron microscope to fine-tune their molecular harmonies.
And
look…how many of us are sending our mighty atoms out there now, far flung
electronically, heralded on by the symphonic melodies of these new, rapturous
cosmic winds!
GHOST
TRAIN & OTHER STORIES by Chris Longmuir, MANIAC & OTHER STORIES by
Debbie Bennett, A QUIET AFTERNOON IN THE MUSEUM OF TORTURE by Catherine
Czerkawska, COLONEL MUSTARD IN THE LIBRARY WITH THE CANDLESTICK by Dennis Hamley, HEAD AND TALES by Susan Price, MADE IN CHINA – A FAIRY TALE FOR THE
INTERNET AGE & OTHER STORIES by Stephanie Zia, THREE by Kathleen Jones, LAST
MAN OUT OF EDEN by Dan Holloway, PRESSURE FALLING by Mark Chisnell, VOICES IN
MA HEID by Cally Phillips
“Not
shiftable” indeed!
Comments
John, as impressive as your list of publications and accolades is, may I suggest that you make one or two of your short stories available for free on your website? This way, potential readers can get a firsthand sense of your work in this form.
The nadir for the short story was probably the publication of David Vann's acclaimed Legend of a Suicide, a wonderful collection of linked short stories (rather like Laughter & Forgetting)...that was marketed as a novel.
The internet, though, has done wonders for the rehabilitation of the form. Great online magazines like 3:am, htmlgiant and Mineshaft have been the birthing pools for incredible new literary talents, and we are now seeing the first published fruits of this, with debuts like Stuart Evers' Ten Stories About Smoking and Nikesh Shukla's Coconut Unlimited.
Can I add a recommendation from my days of reading slush for Emprise Review, one of the very best online literary mags? Out of hundreds of pieces I read, this is the one jewel that gleamed out http://emprisereview.com/issues/volume-7/the-blue-eyed-ant/
I'd also recommend the collectio The Zoom Zoom by Penny Goring, which we published at eight cuts gallery a year ago and which got a special mention in last year's Guardian First Book Award http://www.amazon.co.uk/The-Zoom-ebook/dp/B0053CZHI0/ref=sr_1_12?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1342004942&sr=1-12
I will look forward to reading your collection when it comes out. And thanks for the plug for mine!!
I think the short story is far harder to write than the novel. After a searing experience with a correspondence scourse in short story writing when i was 19 I didn't dare try again, until, after I'd had three novels published, I was asked to contribute one to an anthology and found I could actually do it.
Since then I've written a fair few and edited two collections for OUP. The much-missed Jan Mark (a consummate short story writer) used to say that it was 'virtuoso writing' and I think she's about right. I didn't know Raymond Carver hated his stories being shortened and I have to say I think the less of hime for it.
At the moment I'm rather bowled over by John McGregor's stories. I've just entered 'This Isn't The Sort Of Thing That Happens To Someone Like You' on my revised rwading list for the oxford diploma short story module that I teach.
John - when are you going to let me loose to review Storm Damage? Or help launch the atoms into the world? You've gotta get these out there, man - stop teasing us and PULL THE TRIGGER!
Dennis - Colonel Mustard is being reviewed at the end of this month on IEBR so do not despair - your place in the hall of fame is assured!
And yes. Short Cuts. Excellent!
@michaelcrossann
michaelcwrites.wordpress.com
Very interesting blog. I used to write short stories, even had a few published, but now I prefer novel writing.
Cheers
Margaret
(Your 65th cousin from Australia??)